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like the feeling, I like that weird rat-whatever thinky in the corner.
So you want critic? let's see...
somehow the floor looks weird, but that actually might be vecause you wanted to... it the alley suposed to go up a hill? because it feels that at the gate the tiles of the floor totally change in horizon line... (hard for me to express it in english, hope you get it XD)
I like the lighting a lot, just an impossiblity and would probably have fitted beter it the guy at the window, when the light comes from behind hin his face schould be darker, since there is no light source from the other side.
I like how things are not smooth and stright because that give the whole thing the feeling of the "other", not what it's supposed to be like in an ordinary street.
don't have much add really, and relly had to look for the things I critisize, but I hope it helped ^^
like the feeling, I like that weird rat-whatever thinky in the corner.
So you want critic? let's see...
somehow the floor looks weird, but that actually might be vecause you wanted to... it the alley suposed to go up a hill? because it feels that at the gate the tiles of the floor totally change in horizon line... (hard for me to express it in english, hope you get it XD)
I like the lighting a lot, just an impossiblity and would probably have fitted beter it the guy at the window, when the light comes from behind hin his face schould be darker, since there is no light source from the other side.
I like how things are not smooth and stright because that give the whole thing the feeling of the "other", not what it's supposed to be like in an ordinary street.
don't have much add really, and relly had to look for the things I critisize, but I hope it helped ^^